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... stands for HOPE!
Holocaust Memorial, Berlin

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I really like the composition of this image. The lines of the stone blocks as well as the lighting are very effective at directing the viewer's attention toward the person in the upper corner, giving movement and dynamics to the picture. The dark solidity of the stones along with the way the subject is posed, seemingly wandering through the frame, gives a weighty, pensive atmosphere to the picture.
I think you may want to try increasing the contrast slightly or even using HDR-imitation processing in order to accentuate the texture of the blocks as well as make the man stand out even more.
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:iconkruva:
This photo really stands out from the crowd.. great expressive capture.. thats all i can write right now.. :thumbsup:
:iconeoneart:
This looks to me as a great play with light and shadows and as a convincing composition :thumbsup:
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That's more than enough!
Thank you so much for the Compliment!

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I never sleep, cause sleep is the cousin of death ...
:iconesistrot:
na da sag ich doch mal ... THANK YOU VERY MUCH! ;)

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I never sleep, cause sleep is the cousin of death ...
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:hug:

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I never sleep, cause sleep is the cousin of death ...
:iconnatasek:
The memorial is really great.. it plays with your eye, and it would be kind of empty if there were no one there, so the man, the blue shirt, makes it really great and even more meaningful..

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Everyone wants to be found.
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It's a sad Thing! There are so much People, all the Time, that the wanted Effect never happens! It's more like a Labyrinth or a Play Yard and the Feelings of Fear, Opression, ... never eventuate!

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I never sleep, cause sleep is the cousin of death ...
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thus never peaceful, although in the photograph it looks a bit peaceful.

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Everyone wants to be found.
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Apr 4, 2009, 11:49:05 AM

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